Alec Laine

“Yeah,” Michael croaked. His throat felt dry and powdery. As soon as he stepped into the building, he was blasted by cool, conditioned air. It felt soft, compared to the ...

I'm really sorry, but I couldn't finish reading your piece. The lack of proper paragraphs and the constant new names to keep track on made it impossible for me, and ...

I'm happy for your success with the teacher; it's well deserved. This piece was very well written, and I enjoyed every bit of it. I've got some suggestions for future ...

I got the inspiration for my novel, Shaman from Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone. Actually, just one single quote from Dumbledore: "Death is but the next great adventure" (or ...

You say "Ahh! Michael Jackson! Run for you lives children!", I think "dead".

This is a very nice thread indeed, and I'm feeling happier already. :D So, my smile of the day: I was sitting on the subway with my friend, and we ...

Here's a picture for those of you who care. I might add that you're all dazzling! I've been scrolling through this thread for quite some time now. Keep on being ...

I know exactly what you mean. For me, the word is usually "confusion" or "emptiness". Depending on the situation, and what feeling I'm taken over by, it might change.

A plot is stirring. Hatred growing. Soon, the world will be cleansed. Very, very interesting first line. Awesome. Justin walked anxiously down the dark hall, there was a faint blue ...

“Of course not,” said Michael. “But I can bash my fists on the dashboard and make dying animal noises if you like.” I started laughing so hard at this, and ...

Sometimes I wished, very guiltily, that he would just leave me alone – his pain created by mum’s death and my accident seemed to stab anything close by, like a ...

Eddie gave a slightly pissed of look towards Sam as he helped him on with his gloves but Sam didn’t notice. Typo: "of" should be "off". Also, replace the second ...

I was completely horrified by every single detail in this story. It was very well written, and an interesting read. I loved the amount of detail you put into telling ...

Get ready for some nitpicks and suggestions. This was very well written as it was, but a little polishing makes perfect! Here we go: The only source light came from ...

A holographic screen hovered in front of her quietly reporting the daily schedule . “You have a council meeting at twelve and your schedule is free past then” It murmured. ...